tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post679935295849768634..comments2024-03-25T18:09:35.446+05:30Comments on Burning Bright: Chapters from my Childhood: The First Crush Bhavesh Bhimani http://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-17806522279005958462018-11-16T08:41:03.324+05:302018-11-16T08:41:03.324+05:30Lovely! Delightful story of a delightful fragment ...Lovely! Delightful story of a delightful fragment of your life. I liked it very much.SloWordhttp://www.sloword.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-14602840429173407452016-09-15T17:07:28.285+05:302016-09-15T17:07:28.285+05:30Thank you so much Surbhi. Really means a lot. Appr...Thank you so much Surbhi. Really means a lot. Appreciate it. :) Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-59142842257254138372016-09-15T16:52:25.291+05:302016-09-15T16:52:25.291+05:30Amazingly written..keep up the good work..:)Amazingly written..keep up the good work..:)Surbhi Sareenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02131539972010292799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-80335750792007790472016-09-15T13:11:58.370+05:302016-09-15T13:11:58.370+05:30Thank you, Atriti. I am so glad that you liked it....Thank you, Atriti. I am so glad that you liked it. And also pleased that there is at least someone who had similar experiences as a kid.:P<br /><br />Thank you again for your time and comment. :) Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-2756634298768667482016-09-15T10:49:00.680+05:302016-09-15T10:49:00.680+05:30Thank you, Atriti. I am so glad that you liked it....Thank you, Atriti. I am so glad that you liked it. And also pleased that there is at least someone who had similar experiences as a kid.:P<br /><br />Thank you again for your time and comment. :) Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-25432216000088320492016-09-15T10:42:54.841+05:302016-09-15T10:42:54.841+05:30This was so adorable. It reminded me of my first c...This was so adorable. It reminded me of my first crush of second grade. Glad I am not the only one to have these feelings as a kid. :-DAritrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05618330595594310374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-57741463764987659522016-09-15T08:54:16.749+05:302016-09-15T08:54:16.749+05:30Thanks Simardeep. I am so glad that you liked it. ...Thanks Simardeep. I am so glad that you liked it. :) Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-38933598446901186642016-09-15T08:53:45.565+05:302016-09-15T08:53:45.565+05:30Hi, Rakesh. Thank you for taking time to read and ...Hi, Rakesh. Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Actually, initially even I was hesitant to tell the story through the eyes of an 8-year-old. But since this is based on true events I wanted to keep it honest. And in any case, at that time all those feelings were hard to understand. It was just a simple and pure attraction towards somebody. Anyway, I am just glad that you liked the story. And I hope that you can remember your first crush someday. Try it...It will help you as a writer a lot in many ways. I promise you. :)<br /><br />Thanks again. Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-68658634803543797432016-09-15T08:20:13.147+05:302016-09-15T08:20:13.147+05:30That was a sweet little story, and that too, when ...That was a sweet little story, and that too, when you were too little.. :P Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16301516913105955710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-42931260432557184152016-09-15T08:04:28.269+05:302016-09-15T08:04:28.269+05:30A very touching story. Like a pressed rosebud pres...A very touching story. Like a pressed rosebud pressed in a book, dried and thin, but fragrant nevertheless... <br /><br />Felt like watching a movie, for all the detailed emotions. However, I think that you should have made them a bit older, like 11 years or so, because 8 years seem to be too tender for a child to be involved in puppy romance. But, still... I had my first crush at nearly the same age, though have forgotten everything about it, except her name. :D<br /><br />Great story! Rakeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03114696523481482482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-84048748642276485892016-09-14T22:22:14.016+05:302016-09-14T22:22:14.016+05:30Same here. My childhood was extra special because ...Same here. My childhood was extra special because of Amar Chitra Katha, Tinkle, Chacha Chaudhary and of course Enid Blyton. Glad to find someone else who shares the same sentiment. :) Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-40369835684847916742016-09-14T22:20:27.160+05:302016-09-14T22:20:27.160+05:30I am glad you liked it Karthik and hat you were mo...I am glad you liked it Karthik and hat you were moved by it. Many thanks for reading it... :) Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-38220168085008388402016-09-14T22:01:04.913+05:302016-09-14T22:01:04.913+05:30Brought a tear on my face. 😇Brought a tear on my face. 😇Karthik Pillaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03410712246295331343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-34813794598563119322016-09-14T21:37:16.106+05:302016-09-14T21:37:16.106+05:30That is why it is so sweet. And books? Well my chi...That is why it is so sweet. And books? Well my childhood memories are full of Enid Blyton books, Tinkle and Amar Chitra Katha. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10561481299082968088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-40374923163342292232016-09-14T21:36:46.891+05:302016-09-14T21:36:46.891+05:30That is why it is so sweet. And books? Well my chi...That is why it is so sweet. And books? Well my childhood memories are full of Enid Blyton books, Tinkle and Amar Chitra Katha. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10561481299082968088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-80642948217249154652016-09-14T17:45:03.459+05:302016-09-14T17:45:03.459+05:30Thank you for the comment Shilpi. Actually, at tha...Thank you for the comment Shilpi. Actually, at that time I had never realized that it was a crush. It was much later in life that I understood that I had an attraction towards her. It was very innocent and simple. Something which I feel is rare to find in relationships these days and hence wanted to write this story down. Anyway. I am glad you liked it. Thanks again. :) Btw, which books were your favourite from the ones I have mentioned here? Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-73936804834131935802016-09-14T17:41:16.640+05:302016-09-14T17:41:16.640+05:30Thank you Indrashish. :) Thank you Indrashish. :) Bhavesh Bhimani https://www.blogger.com/profile/03761598132107810359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-2534887021142380342016-09-14T17:30:13.468+05:302016-09-14T17:30:13.468+05:30Loved this post. Very cute. Though it is difficult...Loved this post. Very cute. Though it is difficult to imagine someone falling for crush at such an young age, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Also mention of my favourite books made the read all the more interesting. Awesome narration.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10561481299082968088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-9470627286261995352016-09-14T16:53:48.181+05:302016-09-14T16:53:48.181+05:30This is really good!!! This is really good!!! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16979914900605662323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-61944226835979840852016-08-22T23:05:16.306+05:302016-08-22T23:05:16.306+05:30Oh crazy things would happen during that age.. I r...Oh crazy things would happen during that age.. I remember when I was in second standard there was a guy who was like the Kanhaiya of our class. I though was really shy back then and never spoke much. So one fine day he approaches me and after some conversation when i was about to leave he simply hugged me and wouldn't let go. I don't remember what conversation we had or what caused him to do that. But yeah it was the gossip of the year until he left school,in the next.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03530968020548899189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-50517850371703727122015-07-28T15:13:30.282+05:302015-07-28T15:13:30.282+05:30mesmerised by the story of ur past.........i m now...mesmerised by the story of ur past.........i m now in 12......i tooo had a first crush in standard 1..he was da only guy for whom i always felt something within me...we had a fight and we stopped speaking since my class 10....yet wen v use to meet v would stare at each other sometimes...but i lost him forever.....he is nomore.....i lost him this year ...feb 11,2015Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-13165655051590133182015-06-10T15:09:47.593+05:302015-06-10T15:09:47.593+05:30at 3rd standard u had crush...god...hehehe...beaut...at 3rd standard u had crush...god...hehehe...beautiful story n wat prefect ending..loved that song...u share everything to me but left out the most interesting part huh? not fair...seldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02773672823205724511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-78211486841824054872015-06-09T16:31:31.093+05:302015-06-09T16:31:31.093+05:30bohot khubsurat likha hai aur kayi cheezon ko boho...bohot khubsurat likha hai aur kayi cheezon ko bohot hi khubsurti se describe kiya hai tune.uss portion se main bohot zyada relate kar paya jahan tune alu dum ko chupane ki baat likhi hai..ye sach hai aisa hota tha main bhi apna tiffin aksar khubsurat ladkiyon se chupaya karta tha..he he he kafi embaracing lagta hai..anywaz over all bohot achcha laga parr ke..sumantahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11262147709990337455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-43642701675435199032015-06-07T09:41:12.084+05:302015-06-07T09:41:12.084+05:30Loved reading.. Very cute it is.. It reminded me o...Loved reading.. Very cute it is.. It reminded me of my story.. I must hv been in standard 3rd only.. And there was a guy who had a crush on me.. His name probably was saurabh.. My brother also knew abt it n he used to Tease me for this. Good days they were.. Good remembrance :) priyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03405667790616116202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513662842207219651.post-11339760045453334342015-06-07T09:40:45.063+05:302015-06-07T09:40:45.063+05:30Loved reading.. Very cute it is.. It reminded me o...Loved reading.. Very cute it is.. It reminded me of my story.. I must hv been in standard 3rd only.. And there was a guy who had a crush on me.. His name probably was saurabh.. My brother also knew abt it n he used to Tease me for this. Good days they were.. Good remembrance :) priyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03405667790616116202noreply@blogger.com